Peace March villanelle
Come blow your whistle, bang your drum,together shout Not in my Namelet those in power know, We Come!We wont give up til peace is won,in war all lose, to death the claim.Come blow your whistle, bang...
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Love the form, the words,the feelingsand I could hear a tin whistle with the drumsNow if we could only get the elected-tunnel-vision-inflictedto listenwell the world would be a better placedavid
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Thank you I am glad you liked it. It was inspired by my being at the UK national march on 28th September - 400,000 people, from all walks of life with a single aim - *awesome* Three things in human...
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Valoe...great to see this in here...a fine tribute piece! Every new beginning comes from some other beginnings end...Why not try a new beginning...at The Maelstrom
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I really like villanelles and much enjoyed this one, valoe ... powerful words full of truth ... nicely done!Wear the grudge like a crown of negativity.Calculate what we will or will not...
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Thank you Paul, Beth I am so glad you liked it (now that Ana Pest has been vanquished ) Three things in human life are important. The first is to be kind. The second is to be kind. And the third is to...
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This is excellent Valoe, you did a mighty fine job indeed!Take care.
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Very powerful piece Val, could really see this. I really enjoyed. Powerfully written.Mystic~Mystic~"Spend all your time waiting for that second chance, For a break that would make it okay, Theres...
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Mike and Mystic - thank you for reading, and for your kind comments Three things in human life are important. The first is to be kind. The second is to be kind. And the third is to be kind. - Henry...
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